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Lina:
Wow, I like how you started off with a joke. I love the way you described your grandfather, it could actually picture him. I always thought there was only one type of polio, I'm pretty shocked to find that there are three types of it. Really awesome job
Michelle:
I really liked your post, and the evidence you used was useful, but I have to say it didn't really...'capture' my interest. Maybe if you 'spice' it up, I believe it will spark interest in the reader, other then that, great job!
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